These are the storyboards I created after reworking the project. I kept the setting, basic plot, and story concept about the same, and didn't change the art style much for the mythological creatures.
I changed the art style for human characters, changed the layout and pacing, and altered the plot a bit.
My first design was a traditional comic book layout. In keeping with the Edo Period art theme, I based the new layout design on narrative art of the Edo Period, albeit with a more simplistic art style than most Japanese art of that era. Rather than using speech bubbles, I used narrative text with each page being sort of a reverse-haiku. Each page consists of three lines, with the first and last being 7 syllables and 5 in the middle. Each line has a corresponding image.
I changed the plot slightly, but kept the same concept and overall story. There is little exposition this time, with the plot being told in a shorter and more concise way. I also altered the rōnin's part in the plot. Now, rather than being hired as the shopkeeper's bodyguard, he is hired to protect a woman (this also went through a couple of iterations. In the 1st draft of these storyboards, the woman is a shopkeeper's daughter. In the final version, she is the lord's daughter). He and the girl survive the battle due to the rōnin's humility. He bows to the kami and asks for the girl's life to be spared.
I felt like this was fitting for the Edo Period Japan theme, as respect and reverence for nature, spirits, and even other people was commonly expected of people in that era. Whether the kami are taken literally or allegorically, it seemed fitting.
I started with pencil sketches and then inked each one before creating the digital versions for the next part of the project. I've posted the pencil sketches and the inked images below.
Note: There is some setting-appropriate vocabulary used.
-Samurai - Feudal warriors of Japan.
-Ronin - A masterless samurai.
-Daimyo - Powerful land owners, feudal lords of Japan.
-Kami - Japanese word for gods, demons, spirits, and other mythological beings. There is no actual English equivalent of this word, as it's really an umbrella term for all manner of supernatural beings.It's also worth noting that in Japanese mythology, "demon" does not really mean the same thing it does in western mythology. Any spirit or god with ill-will towards people could be referred to as a demon.







